Magic Land loss in time with Chocolate Factory

Author Photo Shivam Mon 26th Oct 2015      Write your Story
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MAGIC LAND LOSS IN TIME WITH CHOCOLATE FACTORY
BOOK 1

Once upon a time one boy name charlie that boy has win the golden ticket to visit Mr Wonka's factory and he was very good boy and he went Mr Wonka's factory with his grandfather name Joe Mr Wonka called and said come in and follow me and suddenly Joe came a phone and on phone a man said you have win a ticket of 5,00,00,000 rs Joe was happy but Mr Wonka was not happy Joe go back home and open a chocolate factory but one night Mr Wonka came and kill Joe next day charlie come to Joe's room and said grandpa !!!!!!! What happen to you and then his factory close one day charlie came to his factory he see the sigerette of chocolate by which he makes very tasty chocolates. He see that a metal door it was jam he push the door and it opens with a great sound crrrrrrrrrr.....!!!!!! He see their a magic loan of chocolate the magic land was 3D space and suddenly he saw his grandfather name Joe Joe saw tears rolling down his chicks. Joe said that "I have a magic land in my factory it opens with a magical words it has a 3D space the magical words are "EEE YOO EEE" my son close the magic land and open it at a safe place I don't want this magic land in bad use Mr Wonka want this magic land bye" charlie close it and go to another city and open his own factory he said the magical words and one factory came their he name his factory "CHAELIE'S CHOCOLATE FACTORY"he was very famous of his chocolate Mr Wonka search the factory but he can't find the factory because he want the magical land. One day Charlie announces that he a hidden five golden invitation inside five charlie choco bars the luckily children who discover these tickets will be allowed to visit his factory Mr Wonka saw and think that the magic land who have only that will invited the children but he can't go he though if I was a ghost then I can also visit the factory he kill himself with a knives he has became a ghost now he can enter the factory he entered in the factory charlie grandpa see him entering him in the factory Mr Wonka said why are you stopping me I have win the golden tickets Joe said you are the ghost Wonka said how can you say that I am a ghost Wonka said ha ha ha yes I am the ghost of Wonka I have kill me to go inside the factory and get magic land grandpa Joe gave him a magic time he reach in the past in the king's age their was very rich and using the money in bad use he always kill one Person everyday one day charlie went to the kingdom to challenge king he said we will make the chocolate and who is the winner will make the king Charlie's win and now he was the king of the whole land he makes his grandpa Joe statue many many years ago he has his wife and five children they live happily and then the king die the land of kingdom loss in sand some people said there is today's also the loss kind one day one man Shivam Bhatt founded that kingdom and it is also known as temple of gods kingdom






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